1000 days
I read your words again, from another angle
right above two triangles,
and my responses were obtuse.
please forget them, I’ll rewrite them,
backspace, erase,
replace them
with organic golden spiralswhat a birthday gift that would be.
or, to relive the night I lost my words,
traveled through time
back to some primal state of being
no dream has never taken me there
that trip was wide awakeremember that time i spilled the milk?
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oh trin you never cease to amaze.
while you may take offense
this reminds me of Peart circa ‘77
to me that is praise
wolfdown
26 Jul 08 at 11:12 am
I hope you mean Heart, and then I would say thank you even though I don’t see it :-)
Nebulae Spiral
26 Jul 08 at 2:13 pm
No … not Heart … that would indeed be insulting.
Neil Peart.
wolfdown
27 Jul 08 at 10:14 am
I need to look this up.
Nebulae Spiral
27 Jul 08 at 11:26 am
ahh, the drummer from Rush! ww, now that IS a compliment.
Nebulae Spiral
27 Jul 08 at 11:44 am